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An eternal life blessing; listen to HipHop as I escape from this infernal strife stressing ~
There?s no testing; the greatest art form that keeps my heart warm; never catch my mic resting ~
I start reckon; why Graffiti artists get locked up for reppin without a lethal weapon ~
It?s a form of expression without the use of aggression; cops should learn this lesson ~
Don?t be fooled; reminisce the old school; I thought I told you; females rep this, just as cold too ~
We roll through like shopping carts; HipHop music is topping charts; this is for all you readers ~
Check the features; connect the speakers, breakers rocking Adidas imbedded sneakers, I?m a pro found to teach ya ~ (lol)
Head-spins arouse up-roar from the bleachers; we?re just the seekers; enough props to founders and teachers ~
Preachers preach to reach; an art form that involves its own speech; we vibe when we hear a record screech ~
DJ?s drop ?break beats? like ?shattered instrumentals?; gather credentials; four type?s of elemental essentials ~
The fundamental of rhyming got me writing to fund my mental; each differential in its form n still growth potential ~
From a poor residential grew up under HipHops influential fables; rocking flip-flops; ladies dip-dop; kids on their feet like hopscotch when I spin turntables ~
In-fact this art enables me to turn tables into DJ sets as firm cables plug in; crowd jumpin with a ghetto wardrobe thuggin ~
Sipping on sumethin; crowds fit in to watch DJ?s spin in beats bumping and get MC?s to spit something ~
I paint a picture; picture faders and a mixer; mix records together like an elixir fixer; in battles I scratch much quicker ~
Attach a bunch of stickers to my techniques; heads seek the music that my deck speaks ~
Even def geeks bobbin their head to the realness; check the vibe?I know you feel this ~
I?m the DJ running the crowd with my music; while MC?s grab the mic and abuse it ~
Don?t get it confused kid; breaking originated as self-defense so watch how u use it ~
I?m on a Rhythm and Blues tip; incorporated reggae vibes to watch ladies move hips ~
What I do is; crucial to the art form; providing the beats while artists perform; crowds spin towels as if I start storms ~
A smart norm leading crowds, I?m a rebel in place; scratching and tuning while equalizers fade in the treble and base ~
I?ve got another tune ready to lace; as I rock steady the place; needles ?scratch records? like a ?new set time in a race? ~
Don?t go blind by the phase; kids rhyming in ways to get deals as I make artists ?blow up? like I was ?mining? the place ~
Catch Techniques spinning great beats; MC?s spitting more knowledge then the late Greeks ~
Where else can u find scraped cheeks on break freaks who spin on cardboard for strait weeks ~
Bent up physiques; up-rock to windmills; kids gather around in circles to see skills ~
Receive thrills in break tournaments hoping to win so I can pay these bills ~ (I did no lie)
For my crew I led wins with perfect head-spins; busted hand-glides to beats from the east to west side ~
The best tried to make heads collide in lyrical wars; kids forgot that I digest pride and spit empirical metaphors ~
At times HipHop is a steady war but I?m ready for gore as I steadily rep with these 10 bars left ~
Introspect the mad intellect; express dialects with hand-signs I brought rap to def; hot to death ~
Hip hop is imbedded in me; I?m the core entity that carries the head of the seed ~
No body better then me can break down this topic?in-fact for this I?m ready to bleed ~
With immaculate conceptions; I use HipHop perceptions to vividly express expressions ~
Imbedded connections; thoughts expressed through the set of conventions; this art grows like erections ~
4 sections; I?ve repped ever since?breaking this topic down like sediments ~
Check my eloquence; speak with relevance; repping HipHop and its elements ~
I speak with abstract formalities; but in reality; kids spit on this topic packed with technicalities ~
Formal abnormalities; we need to rep HipHop with commonalities and stray away from the brutal fatalities ~ (deaths of Pac, Big E, Big L, etc? all brutal)

Turntables spinning - spitting tight shit?vice grip with my palm composing a perfect mic fit~!
I know im 1 of the few(in not thee) hip hop heads on this site but ima tell you why I lvoe hip hop..I know how stereotypical think of hip hop and I know why people who don't like hip hop don't like it for but what about the people who do like it..why do we like it?..I don't care what genre of music u listen to..u should read this especially if u "hate" rap/hip hop music..it might change ur mind
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AriBlueJ Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oooh I'm late
Can you tell me your
favorite artists???????
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333Tripa333 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Hip Hop head Right here! Word up!
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Chey4ever Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this, I like hip hop just not the NEW hip hop. What people listen to now, is mostly crap and people ripping others off for their backgrounds and beats. I like the older music. ^^
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PROMOradio Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think you should look into this it's like the Facebook for Bach, the Myspace for Van Gogh or the twitter for Maya Angelou.



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YoungSlagle Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011
This is perfection of the art. Nice lyrics, real hip hop. Check me out on YouTube. - YoungSlagle
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iVerse Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011
you record music? if so i spit this to the Slippin instrumental by 9th wonder, sounded pretty dope, you should think of spittin this to that beat, mad props
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ThisIsLydia Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Can almost imagine this with a beat while its being rapped. luv it
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Uniqe-Indiviciual Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011
dont know enough about hip hop2be a hip hop head but i know wat the love of it is.
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Narevar Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Wow
I just read this and its real good. At times when I was reading it its like your flow was jumpin into my brain and I was reading it with pauses and heightened emotions in words, like I wasn't just reading it but feeling the flow and mindset behind the lyrics. Great job
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Uniqe-Indiviciual Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011
i know!
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Duprel-Antwone Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2011
Nice... www.megaspect.blogspot.com
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KiHunter Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2011
Yeah, this is what I've been looking for on dA. At times I heard Big L reciting this, probably because of the -I run with ill kids, and real nigs, who peel wigs- flow. Great verse!
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iluvthecookiemonster Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011
Wow. I do say you are an intensly amazing poet. :worship:
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hannity Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2010   Writer
I was just checking out deviant art and I read this and then decided I needed to make an account. you're awesome. <3
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Artemide68 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010
i like hip hop because it makes me feel alive, strong, and I just want to dance, because when i dance I loose myself into the music and forget every other single problem.
I like the beat, the fighting spirit behind it.
that's why i like it.
(Although i am not that into it as i don't have the ability to create such amazing rhymes as you did here)
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Skeptical92 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
I'm really feeling this man, can tell you havn't wrote to a beat though, but the flow is madd even with the long bars, you can actually hear someone in your head rhyming it, and thats hard to do from text.

so ill break this down simply, this peice is pure dopee .
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WiccanSilver Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2010
this was bad ass. I am taking a sociology of hip hop course and you speak to much of what we are discussing. Great Job speaking to the roots of what makes hip hop a great sub-culture.
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unknown-sources Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2009
we are more buddy,:)
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ISeenACar87 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2009
Amazing.. you ever plan on releasing an audio file you reciting it?
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hayatli7 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Keep it alive.
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jokubelizzz Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2009   Photographer
SICK!!!! +fav
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kid-matherz-dha-IV Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2009
strait up brotha, I luv hip hop 2. thats the type of muzik where any emotion, character, mind state, ect. is shown with a dope beat 2 it and the rhymes and rythem flow like ocean waves. kool rap, do u wanna be a rapper? I do. but remember, its not just the rhyme that matters, but what u say and how u say it(u can even be clever at it most times. u'd be suprised). what is hip hop, its great muzik and beautiful poetry and aint anybody changin that fact.
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Extahcee Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2009
this is great, love it!
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Zacattack990 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2009  Student Digital Artist
HAHA! That shit was sick man.
"I'm a straight white boy-e, Grown up in uh city where I'ma minorit-t, Wheres its hard ta get shit in Priority, Theres only a few like me, that see, how f*$#ed up this world can really be, I'm lookin' and lookin' and tryin' ta be, that best that I can be, workin' with what you see, spitin' to try and put my two cents in on a big dream, to see others break away from this same stream, and live tha dream."
Lol. No but really man, I know my shits wack but I also know the feeling of your rap man, and I love this shit. Hip-Hop to D.A. man. Get at me.
~Z
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thedeapestabyss Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2009
being a mc myself and reading this man.
big props.
hip hop lives in the streets.
do you have any shit recorded?
peace
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Atowndragoon Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2008  Student Artist
nice just nice: too good for real words
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BigLew Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2008   Interface Designer
holy shit this is too sick! :thumbsup:
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PaddleOut Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2008
Wow :faint:

Good Shit man.
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Halfshavenbananas Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2008
Decent. You should come to a real hip hop site to post your writing where you can get real critique on it.

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Earl-neko Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2008
that was really nice and inspireing !
i love the way you put it and i am so faving it
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Shaggyrapper Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2008
DAMN! you are da next eminem! you're so true nigga! you got all da truth!
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Laurenslife Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2008
Wow..

I think I need to check out your stuff more. this was awesome, lyrically brilliant. I write tracks, I'd love you to check some of it out sometime.. I suppose I'll upload some. it's not your usual Mainstream Crap either. Excellent lyricism.
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BusterGroove Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2007
I'm in tears. That was too damn beautiful.
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graceteodosio Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2007
I really appreciated this. Beautiful, really.
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Tosh13 Featured By Owner May 9, 2007
Word up son!
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jonathanw3 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2007
that was fire son
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hworangi107 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2006
i'm trying to move my style into hiphop...R&B...
glad to meet someone on DA with some hiphop flavor.
Keep it up
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MorbidMac Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2005
"Catch Techniques spinning great beats; MC?s spitting more knowledge then the late Greeks ~
Where else can u find scraped cheeks on break freaks who spin on cardboard for strait weeks ~
Bent up physiques;"

That rhyme right there, that one part...
That is so dope..

I can't even begin to tell you how much I am feelin this.

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